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  • MysticJanus

    A few suggestions for the last
    panel.

    First box: “Kaeso Cetus Menkar, called ‘Scaurus’
    by the Alfar, was a marshal all his own. Enemy to all who weren’t
    like him.”

    Just a note, the second narration box in the last panel has a confusing statement. Is the enemy king supposed to be Syrma’s father? If so, then I would suggest changing it to, “He owed a debt to Syrma’s father, to whom he had sworn loyalty.”

    • MonicaNG

      I suggest in this case translate directly from the spanish version. It never said that it was Syrma’s father, only to the enemy king 🙂